Letter rejecting faulty goods
Re: [make and model]
On [date] I bought the above [item] from your shop. On [date] it developed serious defects [describe problems].
I understand that, as a consumer, I am entitled to expect that the things I buy are of merchantable quality. I am sure you will agree that the [item] I bought was not of reasonable quality, considering the above problems.
I am, therefore, asking you for a refund of the [amount] I paid for the [item] [Or to replace the item with another in good working order.]
I trust that this matter can be resolved quickly and look forward to your early reply.
Letter rejecting the seller's denial of liability
Re: [make and model]
Thank you for your letter dated [date] regarding my claim for a replacement [item] [or refund the price of my faulty item].
Unfortunately, I cannot accept your suggestion that I should complain to the manufacturer.
My contract with you, the seller of the [item], includes, as a matter of law, an implied warranty that the [item] is of merchantable quality. The fact that it is not means that you are in breach of contract. I am, therefore, entitled to expect you to put the matter right.
My claim against you is unaffected by any rights I may have under the manufacturer's guarantee.
I trust this clarifies the position. Please let me know within seven days of receipt of this letter whether you intend to repair or replace the [item] [or give me a refund]. I am sure you will understand that this problem is causing me considerable inconvenience.
Letter rejecting a landscaper's bill for more than the original quote
Re: [quotation number]
I was surprised to see from your invoice [number] of [date] that you have charged me [amount] for [describe work and materials]. Since your original quotation stated that the cost would be [amount], I assume that your invoice was a mistake.
I am aware that the prices quoted for plants and stone were estimates only and I agree that I must pay what these cost you. The amount quoted for the work, however, was a fixed price and it was on the basis of this that I entered into a contract with you.
Though you claim that the increase is due to [describe reasons], there was no allowance for an increase to cover this eventuality in our contract. We did not agree that I would bear the cost of such eventualities. I am only liable for the amount shown in your quotation.
I therefore enclose a cheque for [amount], being the amount originally quoted for carrying out the work plus the actual cost of materials, in full and final settlement of your account.
Letter to a hairdresser about unsatisfactory service causing additional damage
Re: [services undertaken]
On [date] I attended your salon to have [describe the nature of the services requested].
I was most unhappy with the work done by you [Outline problems].
You attempted to rectify the problems on [date], but this was not successful [explain why].
I then went to another hairdresser, [name], who explained to me what had gone wrong. I asked him/her to put this in writing, and I enclose a copy for your information. This report indicates that you did not use due care and skill and were, therefore, in breach of your contract with me.
I not only had to have the work re-done but I also had to have [explain extra service] to repair the damage that you did to my hair. The total cost was [amount]. A copy of my receipt is enclosed.
This incident has cost me a lot of time as well as money and I have been very embarrassed by it. I expect that you will reimburse me for this amount and look forward to receiving your cheque.
Letter to The Banking and Financial Services Ombudsman
[For intervention in a dispute.]
Dear Sir or Madam
Re: [bank, branch and account number]
I am involved in a dispute with the above bank, which I have been unable to settle by negotiating directly with them. I hope that you will be able to assist.
Briefly, the facts of the matter are these: [briefly, but fully, outline the nature of the dispute, including dates].
Enclosed are copies of [any relevant documents].
You have my authority to obtain any further information from the bank which you think might be relevant.
I look forward to your reply.
From Put It In Writing by Margaret White